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When I read this poem to my daughter (who not only appreciates poetry, but writes them herself), wanted to change two lines… "Let's remove the 'gassy gut' and the 'bloody noses' lines … they're gross."
I actually think she wanted them removed since she feels embarrassed about it.
Then Six years ago Late night Bouncing baby Gassy gut No sleep Daddy tired
Now Six years later Late night Holding child Bloody nose No sleep Daddy still tired
